Reviews for it happened in a blink |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked the ending! I think this was the perfect way to end a story! I'm sad it's over but it's nice to see someone actually finish a story on here. I loved all the characters you've created and it seems like you really planned everything all out! I think this story was great! Thank you so much for sharing it with everyone! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was the perfect ending to the best story I've ever read. Thank you for such a wonderful story my goodness you are one talented writer. I am so happy about everything and I'm no longer confused or angry. Wow just wow |
![]() ![]() I'm glad there's still one more chapter! I just love this story so much, I don't want it to end just yet! I'm still not exactly sure what the title has to do with the story! Either way, update soon! Can't wait for the end! |
![]() ![]() Yes! Yes! I love everything about this story. No Unfavorite Parts. Just all very good parts. At first I was rooting for Tanner but, Jonah and her are defiantly the best. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() I just read the entire story in two days and i loved It. Jonah and Victoria erre made for each other. I was looking forward to reading about the game her dad was gonna watch though. Anyways cant wait to read that last chapter! |
![]() ![]() one more chapter 3 HURRY UP WITH IT THOUGH pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee |
![]() ![]() Thank goodness this is not the last chapter! I can't ball my eyes out unless I get more closure. I have too many favorite parts lol. Anytime the boys drool over Victoria, she amazes them with her skills, or Jonah "fixes" her are my favorite parts. My least favorite parts are anytime Jonah and Victoria get into an argument that doesn't seem to get anywhere or Greg is completely repugnant. What I think the title means is that everything that's happened to Victoria was within a span of a few months so it happened quite fast, "it happened in a blink". I feel like there's a deeper meaning that I'm missing and I feel dumb for not knowing haha. Can you explain in the last chapter? I still don't know what Jonah was thinking in the other chapter that pertained to the title. Please update verrryy soon lol! Just waiting a day makes me antsy! |
![]() ![]() UPDATE PLEASE NOW PLEASE I'D APPRECIATE IT JUST UPDATE |
![]() ![]() ITS TOO SAD WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY |
![]() ![]() Woah woah woah woah WAIt... only ONE chapter left?! that cant be right! Go through your documents again! There cant be one chapter left! OMG... wow... GREAT chapter :)) Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I totally agree with you doing another chapter. This is not the end. You captured Victoria's anxiousness about her dad perfectly and I think Jonah making sure her dad came was really sweet. Now we just need dad's seal of approval at the last game. |
![]() ![]() Seriously... GET ME WITH HER ALREADY I wanna do it But I don't |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah excited but also sad:( |
![]() ![]() I'm soooooooooooooooooooooo not gonna win. Tanner is. |
![]() ![]() Update more! Polease |