Ahhh ! Thank you thank you thank you ! You updated :D Loved this chapter please update soon, im still team Jonah ! When are him and Victoria going to remember or realize that they kissed each other, or the fact that Victoria is Johna's dream girl ! I adore the fact that Jonah and Tanner care about her so much, you can see it. I picture Tanner as Victoria's best friend and Jonah as the future bf ! Any-who update soon please :)

Oh my goodness! I love this story! You are really good about describing the soccer games in detail, which means you must be a soccer player, and then there is the needed amount of drama. What I am left to wonder about now is whether or not Greg will have a change of heart, what Jonah will do at Emerald's school, and how Jonah and Victoria will end up together.

Another one today if you please. It was perfect.

Is it bad that I am jumping up and down with joy from this chapter.

I love how Victoria is finally letting her guard down completely with Tanner and Jonah.

I would love to see some more one on one time with Victoria and Tanner(since we really don't know much of Tanners background and how come he is really warming up to Victoria, also about their kiss) or same Ace and Victoria (cause they are true best friends) or Victoria interaction solo with any of the other soccer team guys.

LOVE the chapter. Please keep updating. I looking forward to an update every day.

When are you going to update! Can it be soon please? I understand if school is in the way. Completly.
A fan VERY BIG FAN!

Ooohhh myyyyy godddddd! I just realized i cant read anymore untill u update! Gurrlll u better make it quick! Hahaha :p but seriously tho update as quick as u can. As for the actuall book... its phenomanal, amazing, outstanding... i cant think of anymore words at the moment :D the characters are great i love tanner the most i think... or maybe jonah no tanner but all the characters r great :) i cant believe victoria has to deal with her father like that... it brings me to tears... father is a bitch, dick, douche, asshole and every other word that he deserves to be called. Anyways great chapter and i cant stress enuff on how much i live on ur story... UPDATE ASAP! :D

10 chapters? Noooo! I just started reading this story and I'm obsessed aah!

Hey I liked this chapter a lot again, as I end up saying about every chapter! The part where Victoria was flirting with Tanner was really funny, and I can't wait to find out what Ace and Tanner are going to plan. Jonah is so sweet though, and I wonder what he's going to do about Emerald...

I Love Your Story Sooo much ! The whole aspect of it fascinates me ! Victoria's character is so unique, shes smart and athletic yet still beautiful and charming ! Im team Jonah , him and Victoria seem to kind of connect naturally, like they just fit together without even trying. So yea team Jonah all the way! Please update soon, I cant wait for the next chapter :D

I love this story! Please update asap!

It's crazy how far we've come! I am so excited for the game and their little party afterwards!

I love Victoria and how confident she is! Her comebacks were the best in this chapter! I can't wait to see what happens! Thanks for another great chapter!

You updating today? Update soon! Your chapters are always perfect

I read the original, and I'm so glad you reposted this story! I'm liking the changes. It'd be pretty great if you would add a part where she practiced her fighting skills on her Dad. Just spitballing. Haha. Keep it up and update fast please!

Pretty pretty please with a cherry on top post the next chapter asap! :)