I waited soooo loooooong for this chapter! :) No, really thanks for updating so soon! I really liked Masons POV!

CLIFFHANGER! CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER!

Oh dang! I've been horribly mistaken! This isn't a femslash! I feel sheepish... I'm just going to go sit in my corner now...I am horribly sorry...

Wow I'm loving this! Normally I'm not really into femslashes, but this story is just really interesting, addicting and very well written! I love reading the transition from hate to love and loving all the hints of Ashley liking her... It's just so fun and cute! I also really like that it's a more slow thing and that you're showing all the cute details and times of their interactions rather than having it be ridiculously quick or unrealistic like it seems to commonly happen in most romances... Oddly especially with slash stories. I also really like your style of writing... With some stories the idea will be good but you have to force your way through it because the grammar is so horrible or just their style of writing is so sloppy and rushed. But you have a vey good form of writing and there are few mistakes. I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapters! I'm excited to read more into the brothers and their 'secrets' I'm hoping that they actually like eachoher. I think it'd be really cute! ;)I also really like the characters although it's kind of sad how much Alana tries to force herself to hate Ashley but it just makes her impeding fall that much greater! :) Please update soon!

I love this story! Though I have a feeling Ashley is a lesbian or just lonely and is looking for a real friend