|Reviews for Not A Legend: Book One: To Be King|
| A.J. Lucason chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
Pretty cool. I shall review the rest of my thoughts tomorrow!
| koryandrs chapter 7 . 10/22/2013
i liked the dialogue in this chapter. keep it up.
| koryandrs chapter 6 . 10/14/2013
this chapter ended a bit abruptly.
| krikanalo chapter 5 . 9/9/2013
great chapter. i like how you've developed lydia.
| krikanalo chapter 4 . 8/26/2013
interesting story so far.
| CrazyWriter7586 chapter 3 . 8/18/2013
France! Ooh La La!
| Kicks-and-Giggles chapter 2 . 7/30/2013
What a WONDERFUL beginning! Love it so much! You have a good writing style that captures the reader very quickly-keep writing, looking forward to reading more!