Wtf. She slept with his best friend, aborted the baby that they made together, and she still goes around saying that she loves him... hell no. If I was Santos, I'd run like hell.

thanks for writing this, its really good :)

What a life you have if this is based off of your life. Hahah, hopefully the boyfriend part is true and you guys are still going at it (not in a dirty way). I apologize for taking so long to review. I have a tendency to not start your stories because they're really long (8k words is a lot) but it's always worth it in the end. Would it be okay to say that this touched my heart? Because when she pushed him away, my heart clenched. Same goes for the part where he walked away. Good work!

With love,
my princess ending

Aww, cute story. I loved it.

Very raw and very well-written!

Loved this story and I approve of trying out M rated writing ;) Poli Sci was your major? It was one of mine too!

I'm so glad you came out with another oneshot! This one definitely had a lot of drama but it also felt very realistic, especially in regards to the dialogue between the characters and Andrea's fear fueling her "keep-John-at-bay" behavior. I felt sorry for John and frustrated with Andrea throughout the story, so I was glad to see them have a happy and funny ending. I also loved the hot, passion-filled scenes between the two of them! The only (nitpicky) thing I would like to point out is that John calls Andrea "Lin" at one point. Great story!

Why are there not more reviews for this? This is spectacular. I'm off to read the other updates.

All of this sounds way too realistic. I hope the happy ending is your life and not the other part :( Great one-shot as always.