Reviews for Far Beneath Heaven's Light
J.M. Black chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
I love how descriptive this is, and how the last line brings all of those vivid descriptions together. And while also keeping the flowing rhyme scheme, I applaud you. Something beyond my writing capabilities, I truly admire this poem.

Keep writing!
wayinthegalaxy chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
A very good poem; the only line I thought was out of place was the final one. Just end it that way? "be"?
Eremus chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
wow thats pretty cool. no joke, the description was interesting enough to make me click this awesome poem. good job! if you could, would you mind reading my story Goddess Hero?