|Reviews for The Man|
| Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Creepy but amazing! The imagery was vivid and well put together. If this was a first draft, it definitely doesn't read like one. It's impressive!
| John-the-H-is-silent chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
i shouldn't have read this right before going to bed. Damn. I feel as though i can sense that grim reaper type man watching me right now, with those cold black eyes. Great story. Very visual. I love how detailed that last paragraph was..
"..into the windshield which i broke through like plastic wrap.. glass stuck out of me like the scales of a fish."
Doesn't get much more descriptive than that. Awesome job.