Reviews for Revenge is bitter
whatdayisit chapter 12 . 4/25/2014
I want to tell you how much I love this story! You've kept it moving at a nice, brisk pace. The characters are adequately developed, and I especially enjoyed the way you described Tony's personality and the motivations for his past actions, what with the "tricks" he plays on people (I found that amusing and somewhat sad) and his poor upbringing. Can't blame him for what he does, but I hope he becomes more of a good guy in the end, as long as it's not a complete about-face - that wouldn't seem realistic. Nice that he's made up his mind not to con Nelly (or so it appears, so far). It's probably obvious by now, but he's by far my favorite character. Good work, and please update soon!
Silver Stardust chapter 3 . 8/28/2013
This is amazing! I think that as you develope 'Shark' he's going to turn out as my fvorite character. Update soon!