|Reviews for 8th Grade|
| Fierce Ookami chapter 5 . 11/8/2013
its a good story. could be better. you need to work on your grammar but overall your writing is good. keep it up!
| bluecrushsurfergirl chapter 2 . 7/31/2013
It has an interesting plot, but you use too many paragraphs in BOLD. Also, it seems like you're too lazy to use like "One" instead of "1". And I saw a few typos here and there, might want to check that again.
Other than that, good story so far.