FEMALE! It's been a year. Continue please...the world is waiting upon you. Also, love it, maaaybe a bit more structure, but great, I want the rest!

A review for a review? :P but seriously though, great first chapter! Its very interesting and I can't wait to see what you do with it...even though it's been like 7 months since you last updated, but whateves.

I love the little teases throughout this- I'm interested to see where the story will go. You have a very interesting writing style as well, and I love your characterisation and description. Could definitely use some fleshing out, but definitely an interesting start! M

I really do think you've got a good start going here! You have an interesting style of writing, one you can really hear your voice in, and I think a story like this could turn out to be a great read if you keep it on the right track. I do think that maybe you should flesh this out a little more before you offer it to the public to read, though. The overall feeling is pretty vague, and I think a bit more closure would do this start a lot of good. But I'd like to see where you go next with it and I hope you'll continue!