Reviews for Bad Luck |
---|
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2020 THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING |
Jorja chapter 1 . 8/13/2019 This is so adorable and well written, it's my favourite on here |
cat10985 chapter 1 . 8/7/2019 Aww I love this |
crazychick789 chapter 1 . 2/9/2016 Omg, I love it! Keep writing like this, and I will read your works until I die. |
LoveAntiquity chapter 1 . 4/17/2015 I would completely love it (and you!) if you were to write a short story continuing the romance of these two. They're so cute! Although it is rather freaky how easy it is for him to track her down... You wouldn't want the wrong person doing that. Fingers crossed that you'll continue it ;) Thank you for posting this little beauty! Lara |
Fawkes'Flame123 chapter 1 . 9/25/2014 Oh, I just loved this! You write really well and I loved your characters. Sydney is so hilarious and I felt so sorry for her and I really liked the cop, he seemed kinda nice but kinda mysterious as well. It was so sweet and funny, it's nice that you base things off on what happened to you - makes it even better! Great story, I'll be reading more of your work from now on! :) |
Grespitchied chapter 1 . 7/2/2014 CUTE, |
doodling65 chapter 1 . 4/12/2014 It's really good, you should definitely consider making it a full story |
Elle Louren chapter 1 . 4/10/2014 This was a lovely oneshot. Gave me feels. :) Please do atleast a short story with these two characters. Pleaseeeee? Thank you. |
PaintedPicture chapter 1 . 4/4/2014 I have come to realize that I'm addicted. I feel so stalkerish. I really do. Anyway. Another amazing story. Never cease to impress me. I love it. I'm sure this won't be my last review |
carifoo2001 chapter 1 . 2/5/2014 This... was adorable. I loved it :D |
what chapter 1 . 11/10/2013 he's an asshole... is this supposed to be a parody of all those stories where the chick falls for some douche bag? but it's acceptable because he's a sexy douche bag? please let this be a parody. |
my princess ending chapter 1 . 11/10/2013 I'm so freaking sorry but I absolutely did not like this story from the beginning. Don't get me wrong, all the characters are cool and so was your writing but the story line was so fake. Everything just didn't seem real at all. It lacked so much reality but it's a nice fantasy to have. Oh, and I tried figs for the first time the other day. It's too seedy for me hahah. And it has too much of a flowery taste. But then again I don't like popular food like sushi of coconut so I'm a little weird. With love, my princess ending |
Zero Skye chapter 1 . 10/19/2013 this story is totally unrealistic, but who the eff cares? You had me squeeling at the cuteness of Rhys! I had a few bursts of laughter here and there as well! totally going to my favourites! -Emmz. |
PC chapter 1 . 8/18/2013 Squeals. It was awesome, really. |