Reviews for Periods
writing-to-fill-the-emptiness chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
i love this! it's so cyclical, which is perfect since the whole theme of the poem is about periods/menstrual cycles. and "Dad hates periods. Maybe because the eighteen missed ones in Mom's life resulted in me, and a brother. Maybe because Perfect Wife is childless at thirty-six and proud when she bleeds. Maybe because his girlfriend just told him she's just missed hers, and he knows what that means." is my favorite line. i think it sums up the entire poem perfectly. bravo! :)

much love

-c-
so silver bright chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
I have no idea what to say to this. I praise you on your words, how you used them, what patterns you might or might not have used, but the story... I just don't know what to say.