Reviews for Line in the sand
CorycianAngel1944 chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
Nice
frank.pulver chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
I really like this one bacause it really flows, please try to break it down into different stanzas to make a break in each feeling that you are putting into this poem.

I am not a some that is trying to critize your work, but i just thought you might like my thoughts.

How long have you been writing your poetry and how old are you.

Thank you, and you have a blessed week,

frank
wordsaresodifficult chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
I like it! My only adivice would be to make stanzas. Other than that, it's great. The repetition really drives your words in. Good job!
-Robin