Reviews for One Afternoon
Shailaputri chapter 18 . 7/8
To be honest, I think in reality this will not work out. He would think her as someone greedy I think. But that is why this is fiction right. Good read
Blair20 chapter 18 . 4/27
I absolutely love your stories they all have amazing character development. You hook your readers from the start you are an exponential writer!
annayh44 chapter 18 . 10/21/2016
Scream "I am MADLY LOVE WITH THE STORYYYYYY !" ITS BEST ! ADAM LOVE UUUUUUUUU ! BLUEEEE EYE LOVE U GIRL!
ScribingSarah chapter 18 . 3/7/2015
This is such a sweet, well-written fic. The few errors were conventional, and everything stayed consistent, for the most part. I'm kind of new to Fictionpress, and this will be added to my favorites! Loved it.

—MissLoremasterSarah
ScribingSarah chapter 17 . 3/7/2015
ERMAGAWD!

Shipping. Confirmed.

—MissLoremasterSarah
ScribingSarah chapter 16 . 3/7/2015
God, all of those girls are animals!

It makes me laugh. But what happened to this being loaded with humor? Like, RED's humor?

Oh well.

—MissLoremasterSarah
ScribingSarah chapter 15 . 3/7/2015
I've always wondered what happened to her parents...

Anywho, oh my goodness, initiation? The talk that they had?

Pleased :-)

—MissLoremasterSarah
ScribingSarah chapter 14 . 3/7/2015
Oh my goodness, they need to talk or something and like, not FAKE date anymore!

Jeez.

—MissLoremasterSarah
ScribingSarah chapter 13 . 3/6/2015
SHIPPING CONFIRMED!

Okay, bye.

—MissLoremasterSarah
ScribingSarah chapter 12 . 3/6/2015
Dude! Red's fart! Everything else! I just...I can't...

I was, like, dying of laughter.

And the whole "I resemble that" instead of "O resent that" was awesome!

Okay, I'm done now.

—MissLoremasterSarah
ScribingSarah chapter 11 . 3/6/2015
They. Are. Such. A. Cute. "Fake." Couple.

I ship it!

—MissLoremasterSarah
ScribingSarah chapter 10 . 3/6/2015
They're making the cutest couple right now. Seriously, put this under romance. But keep the humor.

A few conventional errors, but not a bunch.

—MissLoremasterSarah
ScribingSarah chapter 9 . 3/6/2015
I'm seriously just reviewing for the sake of reviewing. Just so that your number can go up. Sorry I'm not giving actual feedback, but I REALLY want to keep on reading.

—MissLoremasterSarah
ScribingSarah chapter 8 . 3/6/2015
Ugh, gosh, "feminists" like Bo piss me off.

Okay, now I've got to read the next chapter.

Toodle-oo!

—MissLoremasterSarah
ScribingSarah chapter 7 . 3/6/2015
Okay, okay...I just want to get to reading now. Bye.

—MissLoremasterSarah
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