| Reviews for One Afternoon |
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   Shailaputri chapter 18 . 7/8/2017 To be honest, I think in reality this will not work out. He would think her as someone greedy I think. But that is why this is fiction right. Good read |
| lover17 chapter 18 . 4/27/2017 I absolutely love your stories they all have amazing character development. You hook your readers from the start you are an exponential writer! |
| annayh44 chapter 18 . 10/21/2016 Scream "I am MADLY LOVE WITH THE STORYYYYYY !" ITS BEST ! ADAM LOVE UUUUUUUUU ! BLUEEEE EYE LOVE U GIRL! |
| ScribingSarah chapter 18 . 3/7/2015 This is such a sweet, well-written fic. The few errors were conventional, and everything stayed consistent, for the most part. I'm kind of new to Fictionpress, and this will be added to my favorites! Loved it. —MissLoremasterSarah |
| ScribingSarah chapter 17 . 3/7/2015 ERMAGAWD! Shipping. Confirmed. —MissLoremasterSarah |
| ScribingSarah chapter 16 . 3/7/2015 God, all of those girls are animals! It makes me laugh. But what happened to this being loaded with humor? Like, RED's humor? Oh well. —MissLoremasterSarah |
| ScribingSarah chapter 15 . 3/7/2015 I've always wondered what happened to her parents... Anywho, oh my goodness, initiation? The talk that they had? Pleased :-) —MissLoremasterSarah |
| ScribingSarah chapter 14 . 3/7/2015 Oh my goodness, they need to talk or something and like, not FAKE date anymore! Jeez. —MissLoremasterSarah |
| ScribingSarah chapter 13 . 3/6/2015 SHIPPING CONFIRMED! Okay, bye. —MissLoremasterSarah |
| ScribingSarah chapter 12 . 3/6/2015 Dude! Red's fart! Everything else! I just...I can't... I was, like, dying of laughter. And the whole "I resemble that" instead of "O resent that" was awesome! Okay, I'm done now. —MissLoremasterSarah |
| ScribingSarah chapter 11 . 3/6/2015 They. Are. Such. A. Cute. "Fake." Couple. I ship it! —MissLoremasterSarah |
| ScribingSarah chapter 10 . 3/6/2015 They're making the cutest couple right now. Seriously, put this under romance. But keep the humor. A few conventional errors, but not a bunch. —MissLoremasterSarah |
| ScribingSarah chapter 9 . 3/6/2015 I'm seriously just reviewing for the sake of reviewing. Just so that your number can go up. Sorry I'm not giving actual feedback, but I REALLY want to keep on reading. —MissLoremasterSarah |
| ScribingSarah chapter 8 . 3/6/2015 Ugh, gosh, "feminists" like Bo piss me off. Okay, now I've got to read the next chapter. Toodle-oo! —MissLoremasterSarah |
| ScribingSarah chapter 7 . 3/6/2015 Okay, okay...I just want to get to reading now. Bye. —MissLoremasterSarah |