Reviews for One Afternoon
Guest chapter 6 . 8/22/2013
More now... Please I need this it's really good and I want to see where this goes! PLEASE GIVE ME MORE!
Guest chapter 6 . 8/19/2013
Please update.
More than this chapter 5 . 8/19/2013
I can't stop reading...I'm addicted.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/19/2013
Okay, it's official. You've got me. I'm officially attached to this. Next chapter.
More than this chapter 3 . 8/19/2013
Wow...I can't say much but that. I need to find out what happens next!
More than this chapter 2 . 8/19/2013
I really like the detail in this.

Onto chapter two.
More of this chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
Really like your writing style. You've got my interest. Off to read more.

Nice job.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/18/2013
Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please

Please.

PLEASE!

...Update.

Please?
Guest chapter 5 . 8/18/2013
I've read this before, but I think it's fair to give you the credit. No one likes silent readers.

Great job so far.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/18/2013
Yes, fake relationships do suck. :P
Update chapter 3 . 8/18/2013
Still interested.
Cool chapter 2 . 8/18/2013
This is better than I expected.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Oh...A story with proper grammar. Have not seen this in quite a while.
Michelle1236 chapter 6 . 8/17/2013
Awww! This was such a cute chapter! I seriously love this story! I can't wait for more! Update soon!
zedemigod chapter 6 . 8/16/2013
OMG So cute. They like HAVE to get together (like actually) soon. Just dying over here, love it. Update soon please :)
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