Reviews for One Afternoon
Morgan Lenay chapter 6 . 8/15/2013
This is soooooo great! I love the fake dating thing. I really would have reviewed all the chapters but, I liked the story so much that I just couldn't stop reading.
Dreaminglight chapter 6 . 8/15/2013
I liked her brothers when you first mentioned them. Now... I adooooore them 3 ! I consider them the perfect kind of brothers so... Good job in creating their personality's! :)
claritylong chapter 6 . 8/15/2013
This is awesome stuff! I can never come up with such cool ideas.
werciaforever13 chapter 6 . 8/15/2013
Ooo i really love this story! :) it makes me laugh and smile and feel all giddy :) lol hope you post the next chapter soon :D
CaityLightning chapter 6 . 8/15/2013
Aww, cute chapter. Adam is such a sweetheart when he wants to be, and I freaking love Natalie's brothers. Hmm, they're funny. Loved this chapter! Update soon!
nanina15 chapter 6 . 8/15/2013
Aww I wish I'd have brothers like that.. Always wanted to have an older overprotective brother haha. And I don't know why doesn't she just date Adam him for real. He seems really sweet! And I wish you'd write longer chapters. Can't wait for an update! :D
NothingMoreThanLife123 chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
Yep, those rules are the ones you should follow. I think I'm going to really like this story. Good job.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/12/2013
i'm enjoying it so far...

Guest chapter 4 . 8/12/2013
Good job so far. Like your writing style.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
I like it.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/12/2013
Beverly amethyst chapter 5 . 8/11/2013
Aww that is so cute! I loved this chapter too. Why is kissing off limits? :'(
Haha I can't wait to read more!
Just a Little Miss chapter 5 . 8/10/2013
I seriously cannot wait :D for everything xD
Still loving Adam, a bit ticked at Kenz, anticipating everything brother-related
see ya soon,
Guest chapter 5 . 8/9/2013

imperfectlyokay chapter 5 . 8/9/2013
HI! I'm loving this so far. I'd be careful though, Natalie is JUST ABOUT sliding past the main character cliches. However, the fact that she has older brothers makes her different, as so certain aspects of her personality that you've shown us. Good job with keeping Kenzi and Bo three-dimensional and fun to read! Otherwise they would have been the stereotypical bubbly best friends, but you've nicely avoided that.

So, yeah. Great job so far, keep avoiding those cliches and update soon! Can't wait xxx
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