Reviews for One Afternoon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I...I can't even... This was hysterical. I mean, my mother seriously asked me if I was okay, because my laughter could be heard from that far away. Ah. Nice. —MissLoremasterSarah |
![]() ![]() ![]() If they keep calling each other "fake-SO", their charade will be up soon. Just a few questions: a) Is Adam new there? b) Why did he enroll at that school that year? c) How is he NOT mad at Nat all of the time? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I laughed so hard throughout this entire chapter. Just one thing. It would be easier to realize who's who if you did something differing with their texts. Like, maybe italics and bold? Oh well. This story's completed anyway. —MissLoremasterSarah |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dang! How rich is this dude? I mean, he's a freaking high schooler. Jeez. And how demanding IS she? Like, $100 a week just for being a fake-GF is pretty sweet. Anywho, because this is rated T, you ARE allowed to spell out curse words. Just so you know. Goodness, I have to read the next chapter. —MissLoremasterSarah |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't even want to write a review so that I could continue on reading, uninterrupted. So, um, good chapter, and bye! —MissLoremasterSarah |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well then...this should be interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of the sweetest read that I've come across! |
![]() ![]() ![]() When I first started reading it, I read it out of curiosity on where the hell the summary was going, and let's just say that it's a lot better than I expected. Your writing is amazing, as is the characterization. I was reading chapter 15 earlier, and wondering how there were only 3 chapters left, but you summed it up surprisingly well. So, basically, I loved this story and everything about it and I can't wait to read more of your work! Alissa |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is fucking awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this whole story...It was like really good. Sad it had to end though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very sweet ending, and you still do an amazing job adding in bits of humor! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This story was really really amazing! I'm glad to see you did an epilogue! Awesome job with this! You should be proud :) |
![]() ![]() Congrats ! This was a fantastic book ! |
![]() ![]() First of all, I really loved the story. I can't believe it's already finished. It was a bit cliche but you pulled it off, so congrats. I'm not sure if I was able to review before buy just in case I wasn't, I'm sorry. And uh, maybe we'll be seeing a sequel (or a spin-off, whatever floats your boat) in the future? But seriously,the story was, in the words of my friend, amazeballs and I lol forward to reading more of your work in the future ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was a great story! however i am disappointed i didn't get to read about their first real date. the ending is really cute, but i think it came up a little sudden. I'm looking forward to reading others things you write :) |