Reviews for One Afternoon
ScribingSarah chapter 6 . 3/6/2015
I...I can't even...

This was hysterical.

I mean, my mother seriously asked me if I was okay, because my laughter could be heard from that far away.

Ah. Nice.

ScribingSarah chapter 5 . 3/6/2015
If they keep calling each other "fake-SO", their charade will be up soon.

Just a few questions:
a) Is Adam new there?
b) Why did he enroll at that school that year?
c) How is he NOT mad at Nat all of the time?
ScribingSarah chapter 4 . 3/6/2015
I laughed so hard throughout this entire chapter.

Just one thing. It would be easier to realize who's who if you did something differing with their texts. Like, maybe italics and bold? Oh well. This story's completed anyway.

ScribingSarah chapter 3 . 3/6/2015
Dang! How rich is this dude? I mean, he's a freaking high schooler. Jeez. And how demanding IS she? Like, $100 a week just for being a fake-GF is pretty sweet.

Anywho, because this is rated T, you ARE allowed to spell out curse words. Just so you know.

Goodness, I have to read the next chapter.

ScribingSarah chapter 2 . 3/6/2015
I didn't even want to write a review so that I could continue on reading, uninterrupted. So, um, good chapter, and bye!

ScribingSarah chapter 1 . 3/6/2015
Well then...this should be interesting.
rozalicious678 chapter 18 . 9/5/2014
One of the sweetest read that I've come across!
raspberryonice chapter 18 . 7/10/2014
When I first started reading it, I read it out of curiosity on where the hell the summary was going, and let's just say that it's a lot better than I expected. Your writing is amazing, as is the characterization. I was reading chapter 15 earlier, and wondering how there were only 3 chapters left, but you summed it up surprisingly well.
So, basically, I loved this story and everything about it and I can't wait to read more of your work!
misssmiley03 chapter 18 . 6/4/2014
this story is fucking awesome
wildspark1 chapter 18 . 5/16/2014
I loved this whole story...It was like really good. Sad it had to end though
Veronica Fay chapter 18 . 5/16/2014
Very sweet ending, and you still do an amazing job adding in bits of humor!
Veronica Fay chapter 17 . 5/16/2014
Wow. This story was really really amazing! I'm glad to see you did an epilogue! Awesome job with this! You should be proud :)
Irisheyes chapter 18 . 5/15/2014
Congrats ! This was a fantastic book !
Anon chapter 18 . 5/15/2014
First of all, I really loved the story. I can't believe it's already finished. It was a bit cliche but you pulled it off, so congrats. I'm not sure if I was able to review before buy just in case I wasn't, I'm sorry.

And uh, maybe we'll be seeing a sequel (or a spin-off, whatever floats your boat) in the future?

But seriously,the story was, in the words of my friend, amazeballs and I lol forward to reading more of your work in the future ;)
anonymousvoice chapter 18 . 5/14/2014
this was a great story! however i am disappointed i didn't get to read about their first real date.
the ending is really cute, but i think it came up a little sudden.
I'm looking forward to reading others things you write :)
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