|Reviews for One Afternoon|
| au chapter 15 . 3/3/2014
Oh, Adam, you're dead
| leavesfallingup chapter 15 . 3/3/2014
That final word sounds ominous. You like to leave chapters with cliffhangers, don't you.
| werciaforever13 chapter 14 . 2/8/2014
AAAAAaawwwwwwwwwww this chapter was sooooo cuteeee! i love it! 3 Update soon!
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/31/2014
| Love this story chapter 14 . 1/26/2014
PLEASE UPDATE! I HAVE BEEN READING THIS STORY FOR SO LONG AND I LOVE IT! DON'T STOP NOW!
| save the manatee chapter 14 . 1/16/2014
Awww,can't wait! So freaked for the next update!
| Amy pond chapter 14 . 1/16/2014
I love the book! GREAT job
| Michelle1236 chapter 14 . 1/15/2014
haha I loved this chapter. Ryley's reaction was too funny. He does not deserve a kiss from Nat. I can't believe he'd even try.
| CarrotLover66 chapter 14 . 1/15/2014
Oooh! I like this story! Glad i stumbled upon it :) I love Ryley.. he keeps getting humiliated :D Simone is unlikeable. :/ Anyway your writing is really good! Keep updating!
| sami1995 chapter 14 . 1/15/2014
Adam is so funny. This chapter was really, really good. Great job :D
| au chapter 14 . 1/15/2014
I'm glad I found this story
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/15/2014
Oh this is beyond cute. I haven't been on FP for a really long time, and I think this was the perfect story to welcome me back, if you will:D I really like Natalie and her brothers and I love Adam. I'll be back soon:P
| anni.mani chapter 13 . 1/8/2014
NEEDS TO BE UPDATED NOW PLEASE
I'm really loving the chemistry between them!
| werciaforever13 chapter 13 . 1/5/2014
AWWWW this chapter was adorable! i love Nattie and riley they r sooo cute :) Great chapters :) update soon!
| dreamgirl777 chapter 13 . 12/31/2013
IT WAS AWSOME!