| Reviews for One Afternoon |
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   au chapter 15 . 3/3/2014 Oh, Adam, you're dead |
| leavesfallingup chapter 15 . 3/3/2014 That final word sounds ominous. You like to leave chapters with cliffhangers, don't you. |
| werciaforever13 chapter 14 . 2/8/2014 AAAAAaawwwwwwwwwww this chapter was sooooo cuteeee! i love it! 3 Update soon! |
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/31/2014 UPDATE! |
| Love this story chapter 14 . 1/26/2014 PLEASE UPDATE! I HAVE BEEN READING THIS STORY FOR SO LONG AND I LOVE IT! DON'T STOP NOW! |
| save the manatee chapter 14 . 1/16/2014 Awww,can't wait! So freaked for the next update! |
| Amy pond chapter 14 . 1/16/2014 I love the book! GREAT job |
| Michelle1236 chapter 14 . 1/15/2014 haha I loved this chapter. Ryley's reaction was too funny. He does not deserve a kiss from Nat. I can't believe he'd even try. |
| CarrotLover66 chapter 14 . 1/15/2014 Oooh! I like this story! Glad i stumbled upon it :) I love Ryley.. he keeps getting humiliated :D Simone is unlikeable. :/ Anyway your writing is really good! Keep updating! |
| sami1995 chapter 14 . 1/15/2014 Adam is so funny. This chapter was really, really good. Great job :D |
| au chapter 14 . 1/15/2014 I'm glad I found this story |
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/15/2014 Oh this is beyond cute. I haven't been on FP for a really long time, and I think this was the perfect story to welcome me back, if you will:D I really like Natalie and her brothers and I love Adam. I'll be back soon:P |
| anni.mani chapter 13 . 1/8/2014 NEEDS TO BE UPDATED NOW PLEASE I'm really loving the chemistry between them! |
| werciaforever13 chapter 13 . 1/5/2014 AWWWW this chapter was adorable! i love Nattie and riley they r sooo cute :) Great chapters :) update soon! |
| dreamgirl777 chapter 13 . 12/31/2013 IT WAS AWSOME! |