Reviews for One Afternoon
leavesfallingup chapter 11 . 10/1/2013
Dad is a Marine whose son screwed up... I would imagine that missing curfew is a very big deal.
leavesfallingup chapter 10 . 10/1/2013
They are building a relationship, whatever they choose to call it at the moment. A nice chapter.
leavesfallingup chapter 9 . 10/1/2013
Momma is going to be a problem. She probably won't approve. She seems like the type who would want to pick who her son dates.
leavesfallingup chapter 8 . 10/1/2013
Adam didn't seem too happy at the thought of being used; as if he is taking this whole thing more seriously than Natalie.
leavesfallingup chapter 7 . 10/1/2013
So now we have the details of the failed relationship AND the very interesting friendship of the three girls. What will happen at the dance club, I wonder?
leavesfallingup chapter 6 . 10/1/2013
Scary brothers. Good first date (whatever she wants to tell herself). They seem to be compatible, whether she wants to admit it or not. I suspect that this "Fake" relationship is subterfuge on his part. He isn't acting like he is faking.
leavesfallingup chapter 5 . 10/1/2013
Why is it that I suspect that Simone was the reason that Natalie is no longer dating her first boyfriend?
leavesfallingup chapter 4 . 10/1/2013
Four brothers... not good for fake boyfriend. Then again, he'll probably win them over, become their best friend and spend all of his time over at her house. Won' THAT be fun!?
leavesfallingup chapter 3 . 10/1/2013
And how long will the no-kissing rule endure? And who will break the rule first? Should be fun. Obviously she hasn't heard about the fact that every girl seems more attractive to the guys when she starts dating... meaning that now other guys will begin to come out of the woodwork (I'm assuming).
leavesfallingup chapter 2 . 10/1/2013
Great scenario. And by rejecting him she has intrigued him, since he obviously hasn't been used to that reaction from girls.
leavesfallingup chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Great intro. It made me want to read more.
werciaforever13 chapter 11 . 9/30/2013
I loved this chapter! This story needs more like these :) Adam is so sweet and i love the nickname blue eyes.. :) Update soon!
save the manatee chapter 11 . 9/29/2013
Awww,sweet,please update soon!
Stunnamac chapter 11 . 9/28/2013
I love their relationship! At least they're just playfully teasing now!
izumi123 chapter 11 . 9/28/2013
ouu you know you are getting comfortable when you forget your wearing his jacket.
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