Reviews for One Afternoon
renegade01 chapter 11 . 9/28/2013
Ahh the classic jacket move...

I want more already ;-)
Mighty-Unicorn98 chapter 11 . 9/28/2013
Ohhhhh ;D what did Adam do that he has a stricked curfue?!
renegade01 chapter 10 . 9/27/2013
Aww I love how cute they are together ;-)
werciaforever13 chapter 10 . 9/23/2013
Awww thats sooo sweet! :) they make the cutest couple! Great chapter :) Update soon!
deepika.chakraborty chapter 10 . 9/22/2013
awesome story... Plz Update it... Can't really wait to read it further.. :)
Guest chapter 10 . 9/22/2013
Great chapter. As usual, of course. You're a great writer. Please update. I love this story.
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 10 . 9/22/2013
Awww very cute chapter :) Some of my favourite parts are when it is just the two of them talking. And it was an added bonus finding out about their families and all ;)
ForeverAlone21 chapter 10 . 9/22/2013
Your story is so good. I'll be awaiting the next couple of chapters :)
xosabrina chapter 10 . 9/22/2013
Love Adam so much. Hopefully you update soon(:
Stunnamac chapter 10 . 9/21/2013
Awww I love them together haha. Now, I want to know what he did in April!
CaityLightning chapter 10 . 9/21/2013
Shit just got real. Adam, and his six pack... huhhhhh, why can't guys like Adam exist in the real world? Or in my school for sakes? I love how realistic your story is : ) it's actually accurate to how teens act nowadays. Update soon!
izumi123 chapter 10 . 9/21/2013
I love this story!
save the manatee chapter 10 . 9/21/2013
Awwww,sooo sweet!
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 9 . 9/21/2013
Amazing chapter! I can't wait to see where she's taking him... hehe :)
OneAfternoonFan chapter 9 . 9/18/2013
Less than ten chapters, and yet has more of an affect on me than a thirty chapter book. Please update. Please. I beg of you. This story is too good to be forgotten about. I'll be back soon and hope there's going to be an update.
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