| Reviews for One Afternoon |
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   renegade01 chapter 11 . 9/28/2013 Ahh the classic jacket move... I want more already ;-) |
| Mighty-Unicorn98 chapter 11 . 9/28/2013 Ohhhhh ;D what did Adam do that he has a stricked curfue?! |
| renegade01 chapter 10 . 9/27/2013 Aww I love how cute they are together ;-) |
| werciaforever13 chapter 10 . 9/23/2013 Awww thats sooo sweet! :) they make the cutest couple! Great chapter :) Update soon! |
| deepika.chakraborty chapter 10 . 9/22/2013 awesome story... Plz Update it... Can't really wait to read it further.. :) |
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/22/2013 Great chapter. As usual, of course. You're a great writer. Please update. I love this story. |
| TheClosetWriter16 chapter 10 . 9/22/2013 Awww very cute chapter :) Some of my favourite parts are when it is just the two of them talking. And it was an added bonus finding out about their families and all ;) |
| ForeverAlone21 chapter 10 . 9/22/2013 Your story is so good. I'll be awaiting the next couple of chapters :) |
| xosabrina chapter 10 . 9/22/2013 Love Adam so much. Hopefully you update soon(: |
| Stunnamac chapter 10 . 9/21/2013 Awww I love them together haha. Now, I want to know what he did in April! |
| CaityLightning chapter 10 . 9/21/2013 Shit just got real. Adam, and his six pack... huhhhhh, why can't guys like Adam exist in the real world? Or in my school for sakes? I love how realistic your story is : ) it's actually accurate to how teens act nowadays. Update soon! |
| izumi123 chapter 10 . 9/21/2013 I love this story! |
| save the manatee chapter 10 . 9/21/2013 Awwww,sooo sweet! |
| TheClosetWriter16 chapter 9 . 9/21/2013 Amazing chapter! I can't wait to see where she's taking him... hehe :) |
| OneAfternoonFan chapter 9 . 9/18/2013 Less than ten chapters, and yet has more of an affect on me than a thirty chapter book. Please update. Please. I beg of you. This story is too good to be forgotten about. I'll be back soon and hope there's going to be an update. |