| Reviews for One Afternoon |
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  Guest chapter 9 . 9/17/2013 No! You can't end it there! I need to know what happens next! Thanks for another amazing chapter! Update soon! |
 Abby Daniels chapter 9 . 9/17/2013 Alright wonderful update but it took forever b4 u posted i forgot what the last update was like...i had to reread it again |
| BrownEyedCutie99 chapter 9 . 9/16/2013 I totally agree with Nat's opinion on Adam's parents. His dad seems like someone that most people would enjoy talking to, but his mom is to stiff for me. The logic of Adam moving doesn't make any sense to me, but it brings the two love birds together so I can't complain. Keep up the good work! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/16/2013 Nat is so patient dang haha! I think she handled that situation well and I'm glad that she left with Bump-kins. Do the parents know that they're "dating"? |
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/16/2013 Ohh where to? Adam is very charming, and gets his smirk from his dad : ) I could soo see that xp Great chapter! Update soon! |
| GeekGirl-BirdSong chapter 9 . 9/16/2013 Best. Written. Story. Ever! Carry on! |
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/9/2013 Update, please. This is great. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/8/2013 When r u updating? |
| anonymousvoice chapter 8 . 8/31/2013 Whennn are they going to realize that they're perfect for each other? |
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/30/2013 Please update. Please! |
| TheClosetWriter16 chapter 8 . 8/30/2013 Yay! Amazing chapter :D I loved every moment of it! Haha Adam and her are so funny :) |
| save the manatee chapter 8 . 8/29/2013 I find it hilarious that she can control adam! |
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/29/2013 ThIS STORY IS OH SO AMAZING. Please, i beg of you, UPDATE SOON! |
| izumi123 chapter 8 . 8/29/2013 I love it! Can't wait for the update! |
| Michelle1236 chapter 8 . 8/29/2013 Noooo! I didn't want the chapter to end! It was getting so good and then you leave us with a cliffhanger! Please update soon! I need more! |