Reviews for One Afternoon
Guest chapter 9 . 9/17/2013
No! You can't end it there! I need to know what happens next! Thanks for another amazing chapter! Update soon!
Abby Daniels chapter 9 . 9/17/2013
Alright wonderful update but it took forever b4 u posted i forgot what the last update was like...i had to reread it again
BrownEyedCutie99 chapter 9 . 9/16/2013
I totally agree with Nat's opinion on Adam's parents. His dad seems like someone that most people would enjoy talking to, but his mom is to stiff for me. The logic of Adam moving doesn't make any sense to me, but it brings the two love birds together so I can't complain. Keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 9 . 9/16/2013
Nat is so patient dang haha! I think she handled that situation well and I'm glad that she left with Bump-kins. Do the parents know that they're "dating"?
Guest chapter 9 . 9/16/2013
Ohh where to? Adam is very charming, and gets his smirk from his dad : ) I could soo see that xp
Great chapter! Update soon!
GeekGirl-BirdSong chapter 9 . 9/16/2013
Best. Written. Story. Ever! Carry on!
Guest chapter 8 . 9/9/2013
Update, please. This is great.
Guest chapter 8 . 9/8/2013
When r u updating?
anonymousvoice chapter 8 . 8/31/2013
Whennn are they going to realize that they're perfect for each other?
Guest chapter 8 . 8/30/2013
Please update. Please!
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 8 . 8/30/2013
Yay! Amazing chapter :D I loved every moment of it! Haha Adam and her are so funny :)
save the manatee chapter 8 . 8/29/2013
I find it hilarious that she can control adam!
Guest chapter 8 . 8/29/2013
izumi123 chapter 8 . 8/29/2013
I love it! Can't wait for the update!
Michelle1236 chapter 8 . 8/29/2013
Noooo! I didn't want the chapter to end! It was getting so good and then you leave us with a cliffhanger! Please update soon! I need more!
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