Reviews for Immortalized |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Couldn't they sacrifice Kenna, get the power to kill their brothers, then make Kenna immortal? Then she and Asher could be together forever and happy ending! Oh well... YAY VACATION! |
![]() ![]() ![]() MADIIIIIIIIIIIII! GET OVER YOURSELF! THIS IS LIKE THE LOVE TRIANGLE IN SAO! THE GUY CLEARLY BELONGS WITH ONE GIRL, THEN ANOTHERGIRL LIKES HIM ANYWAYS! ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRGH! AND WHAT WAS THAT ABOUT TAKING THINGS SLOW KENNA?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.o Creepy... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tee hee! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Fangirl scream* |
![]() ![]() ![]() And all secrets are revealed! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OOOOOOOOOOO! THIS SHOULD BE INTERESTING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() still think this is going waaayyy toooo fast. I like it though, i won't lie it's just, this is chapter three and already we know all about these three. I hope these reviews don't offend you. Actually I'll just read and be quiet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am now under the belief and suspicion that Kenna is a moonchild and Madi is her protector. Uh oh... so what does that make Cori? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story but i also have to admit that it goes a bit...fast. I'm still trying to process everything and put the characters into their category's of sorts when certain things happen. I do like the sotry and where you could go with it but it's going a little to fast. No insult or anything intended. |
![]() ![]() i cried that was such a great story u could get it published |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why did you delete Continue...(how do you spell it?) Sorry I hadn't read that in a long time last time I read it was on chapter nine? |
![]() ![]() Where is ur sequel |
![]() ![]() KNEW IT! Anyways, nice story. As usual you have most of the grammar down, storyline, ect. Great! |
![]() ![]() Madison is the Protector? And Kenna is the Moonchild? guess I'll find out In the next chapter... |