Reviews for A Szép Napraforgó
MargieM chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
Hey!
It makes me so glad to see someone trying to learn this language just because he likes it! And as I see, you try really hard :) The grammar is something you really should work on, though. The first line is perfect, but the second one would be nicer if it went like "Mindig téged szeretlek", changing the formal second person to an informal one and using a bit less oldfashioned word for forever. I can't really get what you meant by the last line, but I'd be glad to help you with that too if you explained what you meant. Also, if you need help with Hungarian grammar, just PM me, see if I can help you out :)