Reviews for Brutal Instinct
Moorudel chapter 1 . 11/20/2016
I enjoyed your tale fully. Short and precise, sad how it ended but still a very good read. You should ckeck your pacing and time skips. It was hard to put the timeline correctly into my head since the reference from his previous encounter with the pack and the time he became a werewolf were years appart, luckily you made it clearer after. Although it made me wonder why did the other werewolfs take the boy instead of just killing him, well thats just a personal note to ponder on so pay it no interest.

Good story, I'll check your account for more.
The Orange Cow chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
Very enjoyable story! A part of me wishes there was more closure, like the meaning of the dreams or how the werewolf might be saved; on the other hand, there is definably a certain charm in leaving it the way you did.

Thanks for posting!
The Poetic Hero chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
This is good!I feel sad that he killed tried to keep his human side but failed.I hope he is Writing Bolts!