Reviews for Cinder Creek
leavesfallingup chapter 8 . 4/6/2014
This will definitely begin a rapid alteration of Sloane's perspective on John. At least she is finally quitting that job. Bosses in places like that should provide security for the females working for them.
curiousraspytax chapter 8 . 4/6/2014
I love it! 3
clkamp chapter 8 . 4/5/2014
I just love this story so much. I mean everything about it is just fabulous!
lirelover chapter 8 . 4/5/2014
Oh my God! I absolutely LOVE this story! I just started reading it and I just cant seem to stop! I've been wanting to review every single one of your amazingly wonderful chapters but I figured I would just read up to your latest chapter to gush about your awesome talent at story telling to save you and me both time...you so you can focus on updating and all the other stuff I am sure you have to do...and me so that I can focus on reading every word of this story
Thank You!
echo-echo chapter 8 . 4/5/2014
I don't know where to start but I love this story. Sloane is not a mold of the typical female lead. The pace is fast but not unrealistic. The only thing that could be said is that there is some repetition. But I wish I could keep reading, I definitely want more.
Storm Cycle chapter 8 . 4/5/2014
wow, just wow you really need to update soon! I really like this story; the characters are so real and the plotline is good too. Please write again soon.
alchem chapter 8 . 4/5/2014
Great moments that subtly move the story forward. Thank you for continuing to write.
Guest chapter 8 . 4/5/2014
This chapter was so heartwarming, can't wait to see more of John. Keep up the good work! xx
cityflux chapter 8 . 4/5/2014
Yay for an update! It's my first time reviewing this story even though I've been following it since the start, but I must say that I enjoyed this chapter. I feel bad for Sloane about the college thing; I've got a feeling that someone (John, maybe?) will find her application letter and send it to the college. And as for her job, good on her for quitting. Too bad it only took an almost-rape attempt to get her to change her mind. Update soon!
clkamp chapter 7 . 3/19/2014
Definitely not expecting that! Very interesting chapter and excited to see where this new development goes.
3H chapter 7 . 3/19/2014
I got to say, I love everything you write. I know this chapter may seem unimportant, but it's bound to come back and bite us readers in the ass. So Nina is either going to be cool, or turn into something vindictive. I hope it's the former. Can't wait for more!
Lexi Eraka chapter 5 . 3/10/2014
Can you please update soon? I look forward to reading what you post next. :)
atlalok33 chapter 6 . 2/15/2014
honestly one of my most favorite chapters in this story. i absolutely love the growth and chemistry between sloane and john.
renegade01 chapter 6 . 2/10/2014
Aww that was sweet when John stood up for Sloane :-)
Lexi Eraka chapter 6 . 2/10/2014
I love it so far! Your doing a great job. One thing that bothers me? Your not updating fast enough! Lol. No but really the ONE thing that bothers me is Sloanes attitude. Shes beginning to be quite annoying with her disagreements and it seems like she yells a lot. Which is understandable for the most part but there needs to be softness in there to balance things.
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