Reviews for Cinder Creek
A chapter 15 . 11/24/2016
Please update ! This is a major cliffhanger !
A chapter 15 . 11/17/2016
Omg please update !
GDM Shiva chapter 1 . 10/30/2016
OMG I waited so much for this! English is not my first language, that why I usually refrain from commenting, but I've been reading your story since the beginning and waiting anxiously for every new chapter. I longed nearly as much as the characters for the kiss on the last chapter. It was perfect! I hope we have more insight on Johns mind from now on! Keep the good work!
clkamp chapter 15 . 10/21/2016
Perfect. That's all im going to say. Just perfect!
Neo Rulez chapter 7 . 10/17/2016
This chapter really surprise me! I never thought me know would you gosh the story is getting good and good each time I read it.
Neo Rulez chapter 6 . 10/17/2016
John told the Dahls! Love this chapter! Hate the Dahls but wonderful chapter.
Neo Rulez chapter 5 . 10/17/2016
Damn that was a heated argument between John and Sloane. It is good to see that Charlie is opening up to John I like that part
Ilsa with an I chapter 15 . 10/16/2016
Dammit John, stop being so noble and chivalrous, we're all dying over here! I suppose if Sloane has to wait, so do we. I bet that defense attorney is kicking herself, though.
ObsidianSky chapter 15 . 10/16/2016
Yay! They are finally getting somewhere! Thanks for the update! Keep it up!
Neo Rulez chapter 4 . 10/16/2016
It was funny when Matty called Nina a bitch. Love the chapter
Neo Rulez chapter 3 . 10/15/2016
Awww they got a doggy! :) glad the kids are happy!
Neo Rulez chapter 2 . 10/14/2016
Very good chapter i can't wait to see what happens next.
Neo Rulez chapter 1 . 10/14/2016
Wonderful story really like it!
shinju asuka chapter 15 . 10/14/2016
Aah... Love the pace. I'm glad she was stuborn also in romance department!
toffeema chapter 15 . 10/14/2016
Wow, just wow! Please continue! I love the angst!
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