|Reviews for Cinder Creek|
| Vivian Night chapter 14 . 9/5/2016
Love Love LOOOOVING THIS. Good stuff. Enjoying the read. I love all the cute stuff and warm feels... I'm wondering how things will go once Sloane is 18... will they be able to show their feelings for each other around the siblings then or will things still be awkward? Are they ever going to get a bigger place or since John is into construction can they build a couple of extra rooms and bathroom? Poor John needs a bed eventually lol... Can't wait to read more, and I love Bin Iver also. Thank you.
| NeonRayz chapter 14 . 8/29/2016
This is amazing! Yours is definitely one of the stories I am eagerly waiting for...
P.S. LOVE Sloan n' John!
| the unknown anon chapter 11 . 8/28/2016
two words: favorite chapter.
| the unknown anon chapter 14 . 8/26/2016
This book is a cuddle during a rainstorm. I would carve a million intricate barn swallows just to be able to hold this story physically. [You ought to publish this when you're done writing!] You write so well and the emotions you put out are so pure, intense and unabashed. Fuck, you don't know how many times I took a break just to let my emotions sink in. All the characters are realistic and so in-depth. I feel like I know them personally. John is so patient and restrained. Will he ever lose control of his feelings for Sloane? Also, the tension between John and Sloane almost makes me cry. It's so frustrating how both of them are bound by societal standards(I guess there are laws about minors too?) and other responsibilities that prevents them to love openly. I wonder what'll happen on Sloane's 18th birthday. Spring's coming soon, right? Update soon!
| Toffeema chapter 14 . 8/26/2016
Thanks for the update! Love the tension . . . Please update again! Sooner if possible!
| Ilsa with an I chapter 14 . 8/21/2016
Yay, you're back! Love this story!
| amberuae28 chapter 14 . 8/20/2016
I'm absolutely in love with this story! Hope it never ends. Great writing! Please update soon. :)
| Suave101 chapter 14 . 8/20/2016
Great tension build up. Their relationship seems so natural and easy on the one hand, yet this intimacy and sexual energy is still taboo, from a social perspective (frowned upon for a step-uncle/guardian to hook up with his charge), legal perspective (age of consent issues), and perhaps personal moral perspective (John feels a duty to Gracie to watch her children in a paternal way, and his feelings for Sloane threaten his ability to carry out that duty).
| October103 chapter 14 . 8/20/2016
I am completely in love with this story. It's been so long since I've read anything on this website and when I felt like reading the other morning, just jumped on here and clicked the first thing that sounded good.
This story is incredible! You write so well and I love the characters and I love every little event you've written thus far. It all flows so nicely and it's a really entertaining read. I've heard of writers being approached here to turn their stories into e-books or actual books and I sincerely hope this happens to you, because I would love to have this story to read over and over!
I'm very much looking forward to your next update. Fantastic work!
| DarkSkies66 chapter 14 . 8/19/2016
So I waited to read all of the chapters currently before I put in a review... all I can say is WOW. I love how the heat and tension between John and Sloane is slowly building, you feel excited to read and see how much closer they're getting each chapter. Loving it! awesome job and keep up the good work
| ObsidianSky chapter 14 . 8/19/2016
Thank you so so much for updating! This was one of the first stories I started reading on here and was very excited when I saw it updated. Great chapter!
| clkamp chapter 14 . 8/18/2016
First off, i love Bon Iver and its the perfect music for this chapter with the rain and tension, that you could practically feel, between John and Sloane. Loved this chapter. It was absolutely great!
| Jessica chapter 14 . 8/18/2016
PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN
| SoulSam chapter 14 . 8/18/2016
YAAASSSS! These two crazy kids are finally getting somewhere and their chemistry is scorching! They're also so sweet with each other, on top of being intensely hot. All great things :)
SO HAPPY you updated, can't wait for more, I'm on the edge of my seat for them to acknowledge and act on their feelings!
| Katherine chapter 1 . 8/18/2016
I haven't been on Fitionpress in so long, but I can tell this story is going to be amazing! I love it already.