Reviews for Please
fantasybookworm2012 chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Interesting.
I liked the repetition.
Spring Storm chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
You have no idea how much I can relate to this. You and I, I think we're on the same wavelength.

One thing, though: There should be a comma, not a period, at the end of "I'm looking at my reflection." Just thought I'd point that out. ;)
Black Beauty 90 chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
I understand what you are trying to say in your poem. The message of your poem deals with inner reflection and yet trying to gain peer's approval.
Arista Everett June chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
Aw :(...now that's some beautifully written desperation right there, dear poet!

AEJ
Annie Ainsley chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
I love your poems! You are so talented!
so silver bright chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Something's wrong with everyone. EVERYONE. If this person can't accept it, whoever this might be about (idea, true, or otherwise), then they're not so great.
-TSR