|Reviews for ritual on friday afternoons|
| wordsaresodifficult chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
I love it. Great great job. I can find nothing to criticize. Amazing poem.
| Uniquely Strange chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
Nicely done. I really liked the part that reads, "the desolate street is a masquerade for ghost children,
souls who have departed but their memories remain
a lingering scar, fresh as the saltwater tears we shed"