|Reviews for My Hopes ?|
| Kami2015 chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
A good first attempt at poetry!
Now I'm not an expert myself but I have I say your rhythm is a bit wonky. I just didn't feel it. There is nothing particularly wrong with the poem and it is a fine first attempt.
Very "teenish" but I suspect that is what you were going for. I liked the sort of narrative you had going.
Overall I enjoyed this poem. I'd give it 4 stars and wish you luck in the future!