Reviews for A Song of Desolation
Lord D'arcy Picklesouse chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
oh! how desolate art thou and thy heart...
it almost makes me wail!
anyhow, you have a nice sense of imagery...i can almost tell your nationality in this red that frightening! this poem was meant to be a bit longer...the ending seems abrupt.

but good work pal...Keep on writing and improving :)