Reviews for Hourglass Evenings
tolerate chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
The words felt like buildings and concrete crumbling down slowly and gently and I like that. The poem has a soft feeling to it and the rhythm and flow are great - it's beautiful.
Cesare Moon chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
I am a sucker for a poem that rhymes. This just bliss to read. It just flows.
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
This piece has a great flow to it. The words just seem to fit together and roll off the tongue so easily.
The first stanza was my favorite and really drew me in.
Nice work :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
I loved the images you conjured here. They were so atmospheric. I loved the dropped sentences, it help the whole piece slot together better. I quite liked the rhyme scheme you used, it was simple yet was very effective. Great poem!