Reviews for ACT IT OUT
Lexiimatsu chapter 1 . 7/25/2016
HOW DARE YOU.

HAVE CAIN DO A COMPLETE 180. MY BABY. MY "SUGAR CAIN". MY ADORABLE CINNAMON ROLL. IS A LIE. *CRIES*

AND NOW I WILL NEVER KNOW WHAT HAPPENS BECAUSE THE STORY HASN'T BEEN UPDATED SINCE 2014.

*CRIES MOAR* I JUST WANT THEM TO BE HAPPY DAMMIT. IT IS BEAUTIFULLY HILARIOUS. I LOVE IT. MAKE MORE PLZ.
IT HURT ME. I'M HURT. I LOVE YOUR WRITING AND CHARACTERS OTL. /DEAD.

I BURST INTO LAUGHTER SEVERAL TIMES WHILE READING AT 5 AM HAHA. IS SARA OKAY. IS SHE OKAY. IS ALTON OKAY.
HE SEEMS MAD. I WOULD BE MAD. PLOT TWIST MY ADORABLE UKE ROOMMATE IS ACTUALLY A HIGH CLASS BITTER COFFEE LOVING BRITISH BASTARD. DAMMIT.

I love the characters. Love the plot. Love the humor and awkward moments. Overall love the writing style. *claps* Bravo.

I CAN MENTALLY PICTURE THE SCENES IN GREAT VIVID DETAIL AND HAVE ENOUGH CHARACTER DESCRIPTION TO BECOME ATTACHED TO THESE HETEROSEXUALLY GAY BOYS 3
TamagoLindsey chapter 1 . 7/25/2016
I really like your writing style as well! It's very relatable and humorous and flows together nicely, like how Alton was thinking about what his apartment would look like inside and how thoughts were streaming through his head a mile a minute about how old the cereal is but then his hand is already turning the door knob lol XD ALSO I ABSOLUTELY LOVE HOW YOU DESCRIBE CAIN. ESPECIALLY HOW HIS GREY EYES AND EMBARRASSED SMILES ARE THE KEY FOCUS FOR HOW HIS MOOD CHANGES.

"but his bright gray eyes shone at me - cat-like, dominant, consistent, and very purposeful."

Yaaaaaaaaas look at you being a pro with character descriptions ; u ; You're also good at setting the atmosphere. I was able to feel second hand embarrassment, laughter, and confused sadness all at once so kudos to you~!
guest chapter 5 . 4/12/2015
Really enjoying the story,pls update soon.
I'll sign in l8r chapter 5 . 12/17/2014
Please continue I so need to know how this goes. This is amazing and I love the story so much. Update soon please. I hope you didn't abandon this one!
Fryvi chapter 5 . 9/2/2014
This chapter was a bit confusing, but I still like it
Hope you'll keep updating :D
Fryvi chapter 3 . 9/2/2014
Love this story so far :D
Jezzz chapter 5 . 8/29/2014
I really like this story. Please update again soon! :)
7cm-away-from-you chapter 5 . 8/22/2014
"some people have not updated for years"
ahh Menn I hope you weren't talking about me who hadn't updated in a year until this day.

ahem.

CAIN YOU JERK. I was not expecting this plot twist. I shall miss cute Cain.

Alton you poor baby, I actually feel so bad for him.
PhreshxxxBear chapter 5 . 8/11/2014
Well, that was an unexpectex turn, but I like that! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Megsi chapter 5 . 8/10/2014
Whew! That took an unexpected turn haha. Makes sense with the title and all though! How far are you planning to take this story?
I would love to know more about why Seri and Sara thought it would be a good idea to prank him, it seems a bit random, and Seri kind of seems like a bitch. Does she think he's secretly gay or something?
Also, you seem to confused Seri and Sara's names a lot, a few times I wasn't sure which girl he was talking to.
Wendy Thompson135th chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
I find the premise illogical and unlikely.
Why would you want a review that repeats your own words? Do you think the number matters? Get real: what matters is what the reviews say.
Veronica Fay chapter 4 . 2/18/2014
Hi! Nice chapter! I like that something almost happened and then you left it with a cliffhanger! I like the interactions between Alton and Cain, and how Alton thinks about each of the interactions! Great job!
7cm-away-from-you chapter 4 . 2/6/2014
what . . I'm so confused, is Cain British or? is he faking his shy personality . . hmnnn
7cm-away-from-you chapter 3 . 2/6/2014
*Wipes tears and hugs you back*
Thanks for mentioning me, it made my day! (or night, seeing I read this at 11pm haha)
I've been waiting for this chapter for ages and you certainly didn't disappoint!

I just adore how Alton and Cain get along, like their relationship is very natural and I think they are very well developed. I think the story as a whole is believable unlike many other slash stories on this website. When Alton was all Sassy to that Philip guy, well, it made me love him even more, and shy blushy Cain is the cutest thing ever, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Keep Writing!
Dream Vortex chapter 4 . 2/3/2014
So excited to see that you updated! Oh my god, the interaction between Cain and Alton when they enter the apartment is so adorable (ʃƪ) and it's so sweet that Alton agree's to let Cain sleep-over for Seri and Sara. It's not always easy to find good writers on the internet, but your writing really sucks me in. I absolutely love the scene in the taxi cab, when Alton wakes Cain up - the writing flows beautifully and feels very eloquent. And when that borderline slash scene "almost" ensued between Alton and Cain... Pretty sure my face looked something like this: (。‿。)
Great work! Thanks again for following my story, and I can't wait to hear more from yours! PEACE.
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