Reviews for Escape from Darkness
Hope chapter 13 . 10/26/2014
Yo, it's me. Pretty good plot-wise. Having read it, I'd say it's DEFINITELY a good idea to avoid the whole cliché thing we were talking about. The romance between Rain and Ryan seems pretty sudden already without adding another one. Maybe take some more time to set things like that up? That's about it for constructive criticism. Otherwise, the story's cool! I might actually be updating my story soon, so you can R&R that. I scratch your back, you scratch mine? Heh. See you next chapter!
Guest chapter 11 . 7/14/2014
Very engaging. I think the next chapter should be from Ryan's POV.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/12/2014
I love this story! Keep going then make it a
Movie!
Guest chapter 2 . 5/21/2014
I think ur story was AMAZING! It's like a mystery but u think you will know what happens but u don't...(DUN DUN DUN!) haha! Love the story!️