Reviews for Making a Dream Come True
percyjacksonfan135 chapter 1 . 9/17/2016
I really love this; they are so cute.
Kami2015 chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
A very touching story. Saw your summary and had to read it, having been an underdog football player myself in high school. So on that note I identify with Zach.

I don't know where the rest of the story is, as you seemed to have stopped mid sentence. I was hoping to see where this was all going.

A minor criticism I have is that the story seemed a bit choppy. Perhaps you hope to make a big story about this but I would have preferred a smaller scope in plot considering how much you wrote. The wanting to play football was enough, the bread love interest segment felt tacked on.

Overall a lovely story and well worth a read!