Please update soon! This is wonderful so far, and you haven't even got past the first chapter:)

I'm so excited to see this story back up. I thought it had enormous potential the first time around, and I'm glad you're back to working on it! I would definitely like to see more.

Poor girl, please update soon though :)

Weeeeeeeell then... That was an... interesting way to kick off your story. Very, interesting.

Poor Aisha! It is all I can do to not bawl my eyes out right now! I feel sick for her! Poor, poor Aisha.
I hope her fate will improve.
I'm looking forward to seeing when she gets away from Lord Eugh.

I definitely want more!

Yeah! New story! Few things: First, what's with the description about an 'Egyptian Beauty and the Beast'? Second, I love this already. The whole 'mistress of magic' and stuff really set a tone for the rest of the chapter, and let you mold the surroundings with a minimal amount of words, letting the reader imagine most of the setting. I don't really have anything more to write, so...

Wai- what? Is that it? oh dearie me, you've got me ridiculously hooked onto your story - the mere mention of Egypt piqued my interest - and I have to say, I really do look forward for more!

The mystery and suspense intrigue me, and I eagerly await the entrance of your 'Belle' (forgive me I forgot her name). She sounds so cool, and I've yet to meet her!

Until then!

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Wow, this novel sounds spectacular! Your description is perfectly intriguing.

The prologue is amazing, and I'm anxious to see what the first chapter will be.

Please keep writing, I will certainly keep reading. :D

Super intrigued! Just love fairy-tale retellings, and especially since you've put such an interesting spin on it. :) I could definitely feel the emotion that the mother felt.

I have read your other stories and so far i think this one will prove to be of the same high caliber as the others are :) I hope you keep posting and the Chapters get longer ...