Reviews for Chemicals React
MileyRowling chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Is this the same Trey from Nobody's Home? He is just crazy. Nice work!
JustJazzyD chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Well, Trey is absolutely nuts. His desire for Elena has turned him into a complete psycho. His little rants and stalker habits made his character very developed. I kept waiting for him to kill himself in a car wreck because he was very much drunk. I did notice several spelling typos. I think if you go back and re-read this a loud to yourself they will jump out at you.

Paragraph 3 "...and [it's] way out of her element."

Paragraph 9 "I [bide] my time and I am rewarded."

Paragraph 13/14 "Elena takes a drink from her [red] cup."

I also noticed some formatting issues between the paragraphs. Sometimes they are not accurately double spaced. Example, paragraph 4. There needs to be a break when you start the line "A few people look at me."

Hmm, it's going to be hard deciding who to cast my vote for amongst the entries. Good luck to you.

P.S. I love that Demi Lovato song :-)