Reviews for Zenith of the Stars
360pages chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
I think you could use a little more dialog tags, something to vary and portray emotion. Does X character hold their hands on their hips, if they do when and why during the conversation. Also you are using the wrong marks for dialog, it should be " " rather than ' ' You usually use ' ' when you have someone recount what another character has said.
ZombieKitten chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
Seems like this will make a good story :)
Your writing style is very good too. Cant wait for the next chapter.