Wow. This story deserves WAY more views than this. At least 100x more. Thank you so much for sharing this story, I absolutely loved it. I hope you keep writing! Time to stalk your profile aha.

So I stayed up all night reading this. It's currently 6:45 am and the sun is out and shining very bright. And I'm only on chapter two, wow aha. I love this story tons! I would comment more but I think my brain turned to mush. I like your writing style and the story very much though. Can't wait to read the rest of it!

Let me start that at the beginning of the story, i was hooked. In the middle part I was frustrated by Selena and Taylor's on and off relationship. I hate Taylor for two chapters. And the end made me so happy that they're finally back together. Some people nay say this plot is cliche, been overused by every type of authors, but hey I'm a sucker for great love stories. And this one falls into it. The way you build the relationship between the two, the tension. And I also appreciate that this story doesn't exploit sex. Yes there is sex as in making love but its a small part. The biggest part is the emotions you put into the characters and i like it so much, i finish reading this at 2am in the morning. Can't put it down. Now I'm gonna read the sequel.

I really wonder why there are so few reviews in this. This is a great story.

you should really post the fact that this fem slash hun. I'll be leaving now. it's not my cup of tea and I like to be warned ahead of time.

Sorry, finger slip! Anyway, sorry ahead of time. This story was great because you didn't take the fake always happy route or the story so angsty it makes me hate life (not just my life but life in general). That's my long winded way of saying it was intense but had enough happy parts that it was authentic. But I'm dying to see what happens with Selena and Taylor...and I have to know if Selena avoids the mobs' threats. So please continue this story, please (no I'm not too proud to beg...great song)!

I don't usually review, mostly because I'm not particularly good with words (my reviews usually end up saying something like "you words are pretty and your story is good") but I'm really hoping you'll write a sequel so here it goes (again my ap

i'm expressing interest! ME! :D Please please please pretty please with a cherry on top! Sequel Please! I loved Wrigley and we want more! Me and Jack that is...I don't think you've met Jack, he's very shy you see, afraid to come out of my head you see? Once again I LOVED IT! It was absolutely beautiful! Brilliantly written!