Reviews for Adam and Evan
fantasyobsessed chapter 11 . 10/20/2013
Your in medical school AND your writing? Bless your soul! Thank you for this lovely piece
fantasyobsessed chapter 10 . 10/20/2013
I'm so glad I found this story...though extremely curious as to why he drove a car into a pet store
fantasyobsessed chapter 8 . 10/20/2013
Gah, the tears
fantasyobsessed chapter 6 . 10/20/2013
The tears in my eyes make it hard to write my comment
fantasyobsessed chapter 5 . 10/20/2013
I live that u write with a full dictionary of words :) and dinner with parents? That should be eventful...
fantasyobsessed chapter 4 . 10/20/2013
Love how his story draws u in
fantasyobsessed chapter 3 . 10/20/2013
Even batman gets lonely
fantasyobsessed chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Intriguing and well written. Though description of characters would be nice. How old is he supposed to be?
Next chapter probably will tell. Onward!
Avox 17 chapter 6 . 10/14/2013
This is definitely my favorite chapter so far even though it's kind of sad.
I definitely felt all the emotion you were trying to convey.

And Evan and Adam's exchange at the end...just *sigh*
Avox 17 chapter 5 . 10/14/2013
I can't stop reading this story, and trying to guess what sort of psychological disorder Evan might have.

But I did feel that Adam going outside without shoes in the last chapter didn't make sense even if he was in a hurry. And now after reading this chapter I see that you were trying to create a situation where Adam could somehow empathize with Evan's feeling about jumping thru windows. But that comparison seems a bit contrived because going outside without shoes isn't something people normally do. Perhaps if there was another, more sensible, way for Adam to experience exhilarating pain to identify with Evan that conversation between them might flow better.
mangatake chapter 11 . 10/10/2013
That was wonderful :) You write like a pro, I doubt you'd have a hard time getting published. Thank you very much for sharing this story. I loved everything about it.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/10/2013
This story is so and well-edited.
It's also REALLY funny (but I do feel guilty for laughing at the joke about "rapists" lol)

Usually I don't like the Manic Pixie Dream Guy/Girl character, but I'm definitely interested in how intruder boy will change Adam's life.
the happy lemon chapter 11 . 10/6/2013
Hooray! I absolutely loved this chapter. It was so touchy feely and heartwarming, and now I can't stop smiling. It was nice to see Adam and his family moving in a positive direction. I'm happy for them ( Evan). Speaking of Evan. I really like Evan! The dinner-banana thing was too funny. The ending line was perfect, and very fitting for Adam.
to the a/n: Oh, and a sequel! I'll definitely keep an eye out for that. Thanks for a such a fun and unique read.
Peace out!
the happy lemon chapter 10 . 9/29/2013
Oh my, dat ending! I think I'm blushing. hehe
And, Evan is back! OMG yay! The plan to make him uncomfortable was so ballsy. Very bold and very amusing to read. You also handled the drama awesomely! I loved the whole bit with door. Kid Adam is just way too cute. Awesome chapter and looking forward to future updates.
And all the flowers and chocolates?! You like me. You really like me. XP
MintyChapstick chapter 10 . 9/29/2013
This is just so cool and unique! I love so many of the lines in it. Now of course I can't think of any examples! Lol. I wish I would have found this story earlier and followed the progress but there's also something to be said for getting to read a complete story in one sitting too! :P
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