Reviews for What Good Are Idols?
Temaire chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
You have a good handle on rhyme, I find that you tried to add to much at the end the second have from "Those things mean nothing now" your flow does not mesh with the top halve. Was that intentional since one was of the living and one of the dead?
BrandNew chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
This is beautifully written and very insightful. I love it! God Bless.
Tressenchy chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Great job! Tremendous effort put in.
Healinglight chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
For sure not these lifeless things, hollow titles or deeds.
These comforts of life, these pleasures of flesh only allure.

I love this stanza!