Reviews for Red Horses |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I forgot how I came across this story, but as soon as I began reading it, I was immediately enraptured. It was beautifully written right from the get go. I couldn't stop reading it. It felt like I went through a journey just reading it honestly. I loved it. From beginning to end. And I'm genuinely saddened that it's ended. But the end was just as perfect as the beginning and I'm completely content with it. Fantastic work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I logged in just to write this review that how much I absolutely loved loved loved this story. I love brocest/twincest stories (I know i'm twisted like that) but most of those stories focus on the sex. but I love those stories because of the taboo emotions and the turmoil the characters go throw. and you gave me all of it. it was so good I did'nt want it to stop. I dont know if you still on this site but if you are, please I love to read even one more chapter about them and ther life after the last chapter please please please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this very much, it was kind of sad and heartbroken too, but i am happy with the way it ends. Actually, i kind of hope to see Ai's reaction about two of them being together again, especially Sal's reaction after they knew about Heito. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, I wish there was an actual way of publically replying to guest comments on here. Anyway, I just wanted to address the comment/review that pointed out Mekhi (god it's been so long I almost spelt his name wrong) is asexual demiromantic rather than gay. Unfortunatly when I wrote this story I didn't know there was such a thing as asexual, so the characters' ignorance is my ignorance and I'm sorry about that. I do now, and while I would probably describe him as gray sexual with a preference for men, you are welcome to percieve him in any way you wish. If anyone would like to send anoymous comments and get a reply, you can find me on tumblr by searching ht-pantu. All the best, Pantu |
![]() ![]() Boys, its not being gay- it's called being an asexual demiromantic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the best BroCest OriFic that I've ever read! Good plot, well-written characters, and I like how enchanting you described the setting in Thailand! I enjoy reading it very much and I'll definitely re-read it more and more! Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry, it's frustratingly difficult to do this on a tiny cell phone! Back to Taiwan as a character... sweaty, stand offish, but welcoming to the right people. For all its sunshine and blue water and visitors, it was still introverted and quiet. Compared to the tiny piece of England you showed - both had the dampness and rain, but England seemed warmer, more extroverted somehow. And it was so welcoming to Mekhi at first, then rejected him completely. Taiwan, just the opposite. Your descriptive skill had moments of pure beauty and your sex scenes were very skillfully drawn. Loved it, and I'm thrilled that you took the time to write and finish this wonderful story. That last little chapter, seen from the eyes of a minor character whose actions caused so much anguish was a neat little cap-off, giving it all a good . hope to see more from you soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alright, I'm going to try this again, my first review, which was long and nearly done, got erased. I hate writing on phones! First off, I know English is your second language, and you do pretty good with it. But your wonderful writing could really benefit from a beta reader because there were a lot of distracting mistakes. Nonetheless, your story telling ability is top notch. You wove a beautiful world here, drawing the reader into a heady, poignant experience. The characters were exceptional, with nice depth, lots of turmoil and angst. They were believable, and the attraction and build up was handled nicely and realistically. The setting in Taiwan was like a. third main character, with its own tortured and beautiful existence. The juxtaposition with o |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dear lord, in all honestly I do not know if I want to hug you or push you off a cliff after reading this. It has been such a fucking roller coaster. I've spent the last few days reading this from start to finish. I started it a while back lost interest when Mekhi went to England for his Gran's funeral. I can honestly say I'm sorry I didn't stick around. Not sure if you would remember me from way back then. I did review it once before and figured I would say something since I have now finished it. I am very satisfied with how it ended for them and the extra with Gian was much appreciated. I would be very interested in reading more about Mehki and Heito if you should be so inclined. It was a heart-wrenching and beautiful story. You wove the elements of realism in well and at the same time managed to give a realistic happy ending. My own writing pales in comparison. I salute you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story, especially the realism in it, and the happy ending. I can't resist them. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was entertaining from start to finish. thanks so much for sharing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice finish, lovely amount of tension and hotness :) great work xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like Perry and Ai's relationship and also, the whole convo mekhi has with Perry at the end was excellently thought out :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I like that Heito named his boat after them :) Ah, I can't copy and paste sentences I like anymore in here, but I like when Mekhi says about who else has the same surname, people who are married. Nice pointed comment. I'm envious you can write so much so fast! :) And I'm interested in the in between years and, actually, the fall out of what happened, as you hint with the psychologists mention that it must have been quite devastating for Mekhi. I look forward to reading the rest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was thrilled to see the 3 notifications in my inbox this morning! Yeeeeeeee! This was perfect, really. I had a moment of doubt that it would end happy before this monster of an epilogue. I swear this should be the length of all epilogues! :D I love the fact that things ended happy in some cases (Heito and Mekhi together, Ai and Perry, Mekhi running the hotel) but also realistic in the fact that his grandpa and him never really made up, he lost friends, his parents are more absent than ever. I am sad to see this end, but it was a perfect ending! I'm sure the only reason for the less reviews than others is the incest, its just not some peoples' cup of tea. It just so happens to be likr one of my fav beverages. :P I look forward to reading your next story! |