When I invest in a story, I NEED to know how the characters end up. I love all of the guys, Ai included, and love that you gave me a suitable ending for each of them. Thanks for being the kind of writer who is, quite obviously, a true reader. It makes the journey through your tales exciting and, ultimately, satisfying. And hey, what's really *wrong* with a 3 chapter epilogue anyway?

LOVE it! haha, was surprised when i looked at your profile and saw the update. ive been patiently waiting for it ever since the 'ending'. love the smut (who doesn't?) but i got the feeling that the only way for them to tell the reader that they're older was to emphasize that they are older. but then i guess they have matured thru the decision that they did and accepting consequence whatever it may be. :D you could one shots of the lost 13 years and about how they met perry. :D thanks for the story!

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Mwa ha ha! My phone FINALLY let me log in! Just one word is really needed for this chapter.
HOT!

Oh so sad! And where is Heito?!

The detail about having to leave their lives and the people they love behind was really well observed and I like seeing Mekhi growing up and thinking more deeply about the future and sacrifice.
I loved the sweet emails between them! And I really liked how everyone's knowledge came together and spilled the secret, good stuff :)

Your pacing quickened after this, and I don't know whether it was intentional or not, to have the reader feeling Mekhi's panic :) but I also think it would have worked well drawing it out a little more with your great details.

I am really looking forward to whatever you have in store for the epilogue (and where Heito has vanished to!)

haha, the chapter was full of emotions and a little bit fast paced, but well done! even though i was wishing for a more pretty story for them, i could not think of a more realistic way for their story to go on without all of it going thru this chapter. but well, i am really hoping for a more happy ending for them, and hopefully heito and mekhi would still be together. i really thought that mekhi or heito would commit suicide when people finds out about them. but good job and thanks for the update avidly awaiting for the epilouge. :D

Ahhh i got so sad when they found out! But oh well, i cant wait for the epilogue!

Oh, ouch I'm so sad for them! It was a great chapter though, there was a line about the lightning and thunder and something being lacelike that was just really pretty. I was totally not expecting everyone, like EVERYONE to find out about them, how tragic! By far the most realistic story I've read on this subject matter, I love that. I am sooo looking forward to the epilogue, where they live happily ever after having hot, forbidden, brother-y sex everyday! Right? Because that's totally realistic. :P

Mm... No need to apologize, I think... I am quite sure everybody saw this coming... And it was quite good :D
In a way in this story I feel like the incest part has been treated more realistically than in others, where maybe after some reluctance (and usually only on one of the parts) they jump straight to it... Here, I guess because of the length of the story that's dedicated to their fighting it, it just feels more believable. On the other hand, usually, once they've done the deed, all worries are gone (I mean, here we can not really tell if that is the case, it's been like less than a week, they are still honeymooning), but I for one believe that such a situation, unresolved, could certainly create a lot of anguish in a person. Or maybe not, maybe not everybody is such a worrywart as I am! :P

Only one chapter left! I can tell you I have really enjoyed following this story.

Regarding the smiley ratings, it's not such a bad idea. It could even have more nuances than just the typical 1-4 stars. Also, where would :/ fit? And :P, :S and :P ? haha

Regarding the condom thing: at least they mention it and are aware... the worst is when the situation is not even addressed as if it didn't matter at all (I have to say I've seen less and less of that in fiction these days) (I have yet to encounter the story where someone does get aids or something incurable, though, so it just always happen that when they do it without it's just their luck that it has no consequences).

The second part of the chapter felt a little bit more rushed, but maybe it's just me feeling sad that it's all going to be over...

Thank you again.

Ooh awesome, wonderful! You write great smut! Those dirty dirty boy finally gave in. :D This smut chapter could have been 100k on its own and I would have been perfectly ok with that! Not to say I don't love the other chapters though, you really do the UST thing great, and of course the resolution is yummy as well!

Haha never apologise for smut, you write it so well :) that was great, and tinged with a certain bittersweetness so I'm not sure what's going to happen on the end!

Oh boy, Mekhi! I'm glad they both seem to be at the giving in completely point. That last part was so totally tension-filled, it was like the prime example of why I love incesty fiction! Thank you for another great chapter, and always so quick too!

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Oh no! What a place to end it!
I rather like seductive Mekhi. I think Heito does too... XD

Mmm.. The tension between them is yummy. Love how Heito has finally given in-now for Mekhi to get with the program and tell the truth...