| Reviews for Red Horses |
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  Anon chapter 10 . 9/5/2013 I'm glad this is still the middle of the story - as good as the last chapters have been, that would be a rather abrupt ending, and not as satisfying/realistic. I'm a little disappointed we have to leave Thailand and Heito, but I'm looking forward to reading what comes next. Thanks for the quick updates! |
 UnbridledSilence chapter 10 . 9/4/2013 Oh very good with the tension, and the indecision on Heito's part. I'd say he's over reacting, but, well, he really isn't. LOL AI, the voice of reason as always. It'll be interesting to see what Mekhi faces back home. |
| MintyChapstick chapter 10 . 9/4/2013 Oh no, I'll miss Heito! That scene at the end when they were saying goodbye was so good, like super tense, you could really feel the energy there between them. But such a sad goodbye! I can't wait for more, and to see how they deal with being apart. You spoil your readers with such quick updates! :) |
| whatisit chapter 10 . 9/4/2013 Oh wow he's leaving! So much drama. I was also hoping they would finally talk, but it seems like it's not their forte. :) I hope they at least get to clear things up! But not for a while, I guess... New characters to meet! Let's see how that turns out. I'm intrigued! Thank you for an other nicely written chapter. :D |
| spcecse7 chapter 9 . 9/3/2013 Okay SUCH a tease ;p I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens next great writing _ |
| MintyChapstick chapter 9 . 9/1/2013 Ooh delicious, forbidden, angsty smut. My fav! Lovely chapter. :) |
| UnbridledSilence chapter 9 . 9/1/2013 Oh, very nice. I'm sad grandma had to pass, but the result was a chapter that was very breathless and just drove itself forward; not always am easy thing to accomplish! |
| UnbridledSilence chapter 8 . 8/30/2013 At their lowest, poor things. I can just see Mekhi bursting in on Heito late one evening coming up, shocked at his state, and of course, Heito's self control shot all to heck. XD But I guess I'll have to wait and see what u have planned. RL takes precedence, we all know that! Take care of yourself and your life first! |
| UnbridledSilence chapter 7 . 8/30/2013 No! Not home with her! Home with Heito! LOL |
| UnbridledSilence chapter 6 . 8/30/2013 Awe, I feel so sad for Heito. He tugs my heart strings a bit. If you do give this a realistic ending you should give him a follow up HEA. XD I also really loved the introduction of the "elder sister" as I've dubbed her until we get her name. She's an intriguing character even after such a short introduction, which isn't always easy to do. |
| UnbridledSilence chapter 5 . 8/30/2013 Eh, I'm always one for a happy ending... You could just do a happily for now. Of course by now you've probably decided since I'm way behind. XD |
| UnbridledSilence chapter 4 . 8/30/2013 Ooh! Looking forward to more of Heito's POV. I like them both-you're doing a good job of characterization so far, I think. |
| UnbridledSilence chapter 3 . 8/30/2013 Lunch break! LOL I definitely liked seeing Heito's POV and seeing more if it will be good. Nice drawing out the angst and unwanted attraction between them. |
| UnbridledSilence chapter 2 . 8/30/2013 Yeah, definitely getting more intrigued. Enjoying this so far, and curious where you'll take it from here. Now off to get some real work done! XD I'll get more read as I'm able! |
| UnbridledSilence chapter 1 . 8/30/2013 I've had this open in my phone browser for ages and never seemed to have time to settle down to read it-but here I am, finally! XD I admit it takes rather excellent writing to make me stick around for smutty stories revolving around anyone under eighteen or so (generally just not my thing), but this one has definitely caught my attention! Plus I rather enjoy brothercest. Oh the taboo of it! XD I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes from here! |