Reviews for The Healing of a Heart
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 26 . 5/26/2019
Oh boy, even more unanswered questions than the first couple books. I am on to the fourth
akiraneesama chapter 1 . 1/26/2017
I'm sorry that I cannot continie reading this. I'm sure that the concepr is great but the writing style is bad. I feel like I'm reading an instrcutions manual. It's so detailed that it's confusing my imagination. You should balance the show and tell better next time.
Alaeryel chapter 26 . 10/20/2014
DEFINITELY LEFT ME in a quandary and many many more questions to be answered so will be trying to catch up on the rest of what I have missed and waiting for Michael's and Logan's story especially!
Alaeryel chapter 25 . 10/20/2014
You have created another mystery that has my mind wheeling about now! Something is up with the doctor and Candy. Candy and Drew were mates but she was too young according to Riven and especially Drew at first right or is it just that they were enthralled with each other and they aren't mates? I have to say one of my favorite parts is when you write Candy into each story!
Alaeryel chapter 24 . 10/19/2014
SIGH SIGH SIGH-I am not ready for it to end but I know you will have them make an appearance sporadically throughout the 'others' story but still sad to see this one end just like I was with the others!
Alaeryel chapter 23 . 10/19/2014
Again BLOODY FRIKKING HELL GIRL! It didn't even dawn on me it would be Logan that snagged Janet! I also thought maybe it was Mandy that would be Logan's siren and I foresee A LOT of trouble coming their way now as to who Janet's true siren is!
Alaeryel chapter 22 . 10/19/2014
I am glad Janet helped Temperence but who the hell grabbed her when she went to leave-hmm my guess would be Andreas-now let us see if I am correct!
Alaeryel chapter 21 . 10/19/2014
As per the norm I don't know if I am going to survive this story and the others of yours by the time you are done writing them all! I still say they need to be published!
Alaeryel chapter 19 . 10/19/2014
Ok I was wrong and didn't quite remember previous characters so thank you for the reminder-Raice I thought was Aren but that is Lucy's father-I guess old age is finally catching up to me-LOL!
Alaeryel chapter 18 . 10/19/2014
Well DAMMIT TA HELL-maybe I don't like the vampires anymore!
Alaeryel chapter 17 . 10/19/2014
Well I still say I wanted to kill Rio myself BUT as long as he is dead I can overlook that! I nearly died when I read Brady was captured-doesn't he ever learn although I like the fact that he was able to give her encouragement that Braiden was back and coming after her but I don't want to see him killed! I like Cole and his little group-at least for now anyway! You are still doing an AMAZING JOB with the stories and I want so bad to find me a real life werewolf or vamp-preferably a werewolf!
Alaeryel chapter 16 . 10/19/2014
You have me so confused right now but in a good way! Is there more to Temperence than we all may have originally thought? Has her scars really disappeared or is he playing a game with her as she thinks? I would hate to be the one to face Barbara AND Sara but for different reasons! I can't wait for more so on to the next chapter before my poor eyes and body decide it is time for this old lady to hit the hay!
Alaeryel chapter 15 . 10/19/2014
Well I half expected the children to be the ones that survived those A**HOLES! Andreas-wasn't he the one teaching Riven's pack to prepare them for a fight with Aren's father? Also I have to wonder if the vampire that has Braiden is somehow related to May's twin sister! DAMN YOU HAVE MY MIND JUMPING!
Alaeryel chapter 14 . 10/19/2014
HOLY BLOODY FRIKKING HELL Hayley-you are killing me!
Alaeryel chapter 13 . 10/19/2014
You are right she does appear at the most important times! God I am dying more now than ever and I find myself bouncing around from the buzz of all of this chaos-as if I don't have enough of my own BUT the chaos of the story deflects from everything else! I can't wait to see what you have happening in the next chapter so tata for a few!
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