Reviews for One Hot Summer
LivieRose chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
I think you should draw this out and expand it a lot more. Sex was a complete taboo, and Ellie was raised to never even kiss a boy at that age. It should probably take him longer to convince her to kiss him, to let him touch her, and for them to make their way to the bedroom and end up on the bed. No matter how hypnotizing he may be, Ellie would probably still be hesitant. And her older brother would probably be even angrier. Also, if the cut on Bobby's arm isn't relevant, I would take it out. If it is relevant, then you should probably tie it in.

Overall, though, it's a great story, and you have a lot of wonderful things happening here. Good work!
SamaraL chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
I absolutely love this story. It's perfect
Kriss chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Wow That was amazing
Kayla chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
That story was so unbelievably sweet! Great work, really! I just had to review cause I think this story really deserves a lot of them, so yeah, that was so cute and great job!(:
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
it was a good story and the ending was different
Ice Bubble chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
This was really nice; very well written and pleasant.