Reviews for Yin and yang
Veronica Fay chapter 9 . 10/17/2013
I like how you do the different POVs! Interesting :)
Shadowswept chapter 7 . 9/4/2013
Very cool! I love the thing with the eyes, the black and the white. She's got power over darkness and cold, and he's got the light and fire. Then together they can control a lot more. Good cliffhanger at the end.
Neo Rulez chapter 2 . 9/4/2013
Interesting chapter can't wait to see what happens next
Shadowswept chapter 6 . 8/30/2013
This chapter was more straightforward and much easier to follow. The ancient book is intriguing. I like the way you've set up this mystery and am curious to see how it unfolds. Also, I'm wondering if there will be romance between yin and yang.
Shadowswept chapter 5 . 8/23/2013
At first I was confused about who Carla was. So, they have normal families and act like normal teenagers for the most part, but they know about this supernatural side to themselves. It seems like her family knows too and doesn't question it. I'm wondering how they all found out about it. I like the description of his eyes being the lightest possible blue with the darkest possible black. Pretty cool!
Shadowswept chapter 4 . 8/19/2013
That was a cool meeting between them! I like how they both said it at the same time. This is so different from anything else that I've read. I think most people just go for the familiar, so bravo for avoiding a formula romance. There is more to Jana than even she is aware of, and I think her mother knows what it is. I hope you will continue with this story. I'd like to see where you take it.
Shadowswept chapter 3 . 8/19/2013
I actually like the length of the chapters, because they're quick and easy to read. You have a way of moving the story along very well in just a few paragraphs. These characters are so interesting and original! I'm intrigued with the way they recognized each other almost immediately.
Shadowswept chapter 2 . 8/19/2013
Very creative and interesting! The chapter was short, but you conveyed a lot with your vivid descriptions and different points of view. The only mistake I noticed was that the first paragraph was written in third person, but the rest are first person points of view. That was a little confusing at first.
Shadowswept chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
These sound like fascinating characters to me. It's opposites attract taken to a whole new level. This is a very creative idea, and I will definitely check out the other chapters.