|Reviews for Last stand|
| harrisonmarks chapter 6 . 8/9/2013
Missing a few comma's here and there and I felt that this while whole chapter was rushed, but it is still an interesting development to the story
| freddyburn chapter 6 . 8/9/2013
| freddyburn chapter 5 . 8/7/2013
| freddyburn chapter 4 . 8/7/2013
| harrisonmarks chapter 4 . 8/7/2013
Hey, my friend freddyburn told me about this story.
It's a cool story man. A few minor mistakes here and there in relation to grammar, but it seems that you have a solid plot and an interesting main character.
Perhaps more character insight is needed and a description of the character wouldn't go too far astray. Maybe he could catch sight of himself in a mirror and you could describe him that way, right before he spots a zombie over his shoulder, ready to attack? Just a suggestion. Keep up the good work
| freddyburn chapter 3 . 8/6/2013
I like your plot. Many say the zombie genre is dead (FYI, that was intended), but you have done a good job of putting a spin on in. Smart zombies? Fast zombies? Epic
| freddyburn chapter 2 . 8/6/2013
OK, good second chapter. A few minor mistakes relating to proper use of commas et al. You may want to re-read some sentences as they were hard to make sense of.
| freddyburn chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
Great start to the story. Hope to see more soon.
FYI (and this is a total self plug) I am after starting a zombie story too