Reviews for Tomboy
SamaraL chapter 7 . 8/21/2013
Poor Jake. I decidedly like this guy. I think he is more mature in many ways than Cam and that is probably her saving grace, b/c somebody else would not have had that much self control. And Cam is too... I don't know. Very much behind him in that area. She needs to grow up emotionally. Her hormones woke up, but she is still a kid and just wants to have her friend and play sex with him. But that does not work like that with somebody who actually cares about you, honey!
SamaraL chapter 6 . 8/21/2013
"I want you to kiss me again," I blurted without thinking.

In an instant, he had spun around and brought his lips crashing down on mine. My passion ignited instantaneously too, and I couldn't get close enough to him fast enough. - love this.

She is so upfront and I think it is partially b/c of her personality, but also b/c she trusts Jake and feels comfortable to be herself around him. Again, this girl rocks.
And I love that she punched a guy for her best friend. If I were a guy, I would fall for her.
CaityLightning chapter 13 . 8/21/2013
Wonderful chapter! In glad they came to some sort or truce about where they're heading in the direction of a relationship. The road trip was nice, they're just so perfect for each other! You feel me? They just balance each other out, with Cam being the insensitive one, and Jake being the one who expresses his emotions rather than pushes them away. They counterbalance each other, that's what I feel. Update soon! I love your story, and, honesty, it just keeps getting better whilst it progresses.
Alejandra chapter 13 . 8/21/2013
I love this story! Omg can't wait to see what happens next with Jake and Cam!
Michelle1236 chapter 13 . 8/21/2013
This was a great chapter! I'm obsessed with Cam and Jake! I seriously can't wait for them to finally be together! I hope she decides that she wants to be with jake romantically! It's eating me up inside to see Jake this sad! Cam needs to tell him how she feels! Because she totally has feelings for him! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

xoxo,
Michelle
CeCe chapter 13 . 8/21/2013
OMG! Jake's is so sweeet! Well maybe not sweet. But he loves Cam! And she loves him too!
SunnySideUp26 chapter 13 . 8/21/2013
hahaha I love jake. I couldn't help but laugh when he admitted to calling out her name! great chapter :) please update soon!
yeoz chapter 12 . 8/20/2013
:-) .,... if only you could see me right now. Crazed look in my eyes, and a cheesy smile. That was AMAZING !man i was so hooked, a tornado could've passed by and i wouldn't have noticed :-) i almost cried when i got to the end, no joke ;P update soon superstar! ;)
Hayit'Serenity chapter 12 . 8/20/2013
I love this fic.! It's really good and different from most stories it's the brothers best friend story with a twist .! Update soon please .! Hayit'sSerenity
kriss chapter 12 . 8/20/2013
Omg can you please update this is like the best story ever !
SamaraL chapter 5 . 8/20/2013
This is brilliant solution for her conundrum. How can a girl be that naive? But then again, she has chosen to avoid relationships on purpose. I feel for Jake, although there is one thing that's been bugging me - why did he bring a girl to sleep with in Cam's bed? If he really likes her, why would he expose her to that? Was it some kind of tantrum or a way to contain himself around her, while using other girl instead? Then it's really screwed up and immature.
SamaraL chapter 4 . 8/19/2013
Love so many things: Love Mom. She is so nonintrusive, but supportive. Love Kyle. Love how Cam thinks very practically and how real and down to earth she is. She is not afraid at all of her sexuality, she welcomes the fact that she now starts to feel attraction. She has no experience in relationships, so it makes sense that she wants to start somewhere. And Jake is probably one of my favorite teenage boys on this site.
SamaraL chapter 3 . 8/19/2013
Perfet, Just perfect. I really enjoy your writing. It is absolutely fresh!
SamaraL chapter 2 . 8/19/2013
This is the most unexpected and hillarious porn watching I've ever read. In fact, I love everything about the story and your writing: the characters, their interactions, the situations. they all seem so fun and real.
SamaraL chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
Very interesting. I like the set up about a tomboyish girl who has not realized that she is actually turning into a woman. And this Jake guy seems like he is interested in her.
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